CRITIQUE // HOW IS MY DRIVING, GOOD SIR?

[meatshield_withcheese]

"Now that the warm fuzzy part is over we can get back to the ritual dismemberments.

Oh wait, it's not Tuesday is it?"

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My biggest request is that you provide examples (meaning links!) of any screw ups I may have managed. Otherwise, have at it.